Mistake 01 · the script before any credit
The founder's worst moment wasn't believable.
My opening line had him three days from a Diwali sale with no ads at all. No real founder is that unprepared, and every founder watching would know it.
✓ Fixed in the script✕ WasDiwali sale in three days. Zero ads.
✓ NowDiwali sale in three days. My ads just died.
The low must be a fear your viewer has lived. Ads that stop working right before a sale is one; having none is a strawman.







